Literary Essay

In L/L Writing we had to write a literary essay about a story or poem that we read in class.

 The phoenix
"The Phoenix" wrtitten by Silvia T.Wn,is about a man called Mr Poldero , who tortures a mythycal bird just for money..his essay will analyse the characters wich are Mr Poldero and Lord Strawberry.
The first character to analyse is Mr Poldero, he is a cruel and an ambitious person .He makes everything for money, he does not mind hurting animals..or example when he had the idea to gain money,"Supose, continued Mr Poldero , we could somehow get him alight, we'd advertise it before hand ".Also he is a greedy person.
The other character to analyse is Lord Strawberry, he also has an aviary , all his life he looked for the phoenix and finally found it and bought it ,"Finally Lord Strawberry went himself to Arabia , where, after some months , he found a phoenix, won its confidence , caught it and bring it home in perfect conditions". He die after the 2ww.
As a conclusion the characters analysed were Lord Strawberry and Mr Poldero.Reading the story I could realyse that everything you make then it returns.

Short story

In the class of L/L Writing we have to write a short story that had to finished with "that was the last time I saw him/her"

                                                    The Party
911?!... -shouted Mike ,"There was a murder in my house!".
That same night , Mike was in the police station saying what happened, What he saw and if he could  describe the murder.
-"Please Mike , tell me the truth, What did you see this morning when you arrived home?".- Asked the detective .-"Okay , this is a long story :
Yesterday I was going to go to a party with my friend Josh.One minute before the party, Josh told me that he was not going to the party because he had problems with some bad people .He also asked me if he could sleep in my house only for one night because those peolpe who are looking for him knew his adress, and I let him stay.
Whatever , I went alone to the party and I had a good time meeting new people .But...there were some guys who knew that I was going to go to the party with Josh.I called him to tell him that some guys were looking for him, Josh told me that he don't know them and please if I could not give the address where he was , but it was too late.
The party finished and I returned home in the morning and when I arrived , I could see a big graffity of blood saying "He paid the consequences", when I entered home Ibsaw two teenagers finishing painting other graffities on the wall .I shouted at them and I could see the face of one of them , It was a 18 years old boy with a hat.That was the last time I saw him.

Diary Entries

We have to make diary entries as if we are Tomy Castelli (main character of the story "the prision") these diary entries must have more than 200 words.

Tuesday 12th

Dear Diary ,
Today I will start making thess diary entries because it is the only day I'm free .I will talk about my past because I'm very worried .I used to be a bad kid, I used to hold up a licor store and nowadays my father and my wife's father made an argument to marry Rosa .I don't want it , so I'm going to Texas to see if my father regrets of this marriage

Tuesday 22 th

Dear diary

Today I return from Texas , nothing change .My father didn't regret so I will marry Rosa , I dont love her! Her father wants me to open a Candy Store  because he wants me to live a honest life.It is so boring, I am all day at the Candy Store and all day looking at Rosa's face. My days are always the same, I wake up , I get dressed and then I go to the Candy Store all day .Then I go home , eat and finally I go to sleep .And this rutine I repeat it all the days of my life except on Tuesdays , that Rosa goes shopping and I have time to make whatever I want.

Description of a celebrity

In L/L Writing with the teacher Victoria Gregov , we have to make a description of a famous person that we have chosen without saying his name.Here is my description:

He was born the 27 of June of 1999 so he is 16 years old. He lives in Atlanta, EEUU. He has a father called William and no mother and brother.The first time I saw him , was making an action movie in a zombie serie in 2010.

He is 1, 63 tall, he has blue eyes , black and long hair and he is thin and strong

He loves football and American Football.He loves to meet with his school mates and his friends of the serie where he acts.

He is a very young actor with a big fututre in acting . He has been an actor since he was 6 years old , he started his carreer in 2005 , and he loves it.

He recived an award for the best young actor of the 2014 and an award for the best serie in 2014

In  my opinion he is the best actor of "The Walking Dead"cast and he acts as my favourite character in the serie .His name is Chandler Riggs and he acts as Carl Grimes , the son of the main character of "The Walking Dead"