Literary Essay

In L/L Writing we had to write a literary essay about a story or poem that we read in class.

 The phoenix
"The Phoenix" wrtitten by Silvia T.Wn,is about a man called Mr Poldero , who tortures a mythycal bird just for money..his essay will analyse the characters wich are Mr Poldero and Lord Strawberry.
The first character to analyse is Mr Poldero, he is a cruel and an ambitious person .He makes everything for money, he does not mind hurting animals..or example when he had the idea to gain money,"Supose, continued Mr Poldero , we could somehow get him alight, we'd advertise it before hand ".Also he is a greedy person.
The other character to analyse is Lord Strawberry, he also has an aviary , all his life he looked for the phoenix and finally found it and bought it ,"Finally Lord Strawberry went himself to Arabia , where, after some months , he found a phoenix, won its confidence , caught it and bring it home in perfect conditions". He die after the 2ww.
As a conclusion the characters analysed were Lord Strawberry and Mr Poldero.Reading the story I could realyse that everything you make then it returns.

Actividad Que Me Apasiona

En la clase de lengua tuvimos que armar un texto explicando cual era la actividad que mas nos apasiona siguiendo algunos requisitos.

La actividad que me apasiona es el rugby.

Descubrí el rugby a la edad de 9 años gracias al colegio.Cuando estábamos en 3er grado de primaria empezamos a practicar rugby, y desde ese año me apasiona.

Me empezo a gustar el rugby entonces decidí empezar en un club, como mis amigos iban a San Albano quise irme con ellos, cuando se lo pregunté a mi papá me dijo que antes de empezar ahí pruebe otro club que me quedaba más cerca,”Pucara”. Estoy hace 4 años en Pucará, sufrí lesiones en el hombro, en la rodilla , muñeca y dedos.Pero sigo jugando porque en un futuro quiero llegar lo más lejos posible.

Mis motivos de seguir son que: quiero representar los colores del club en torneos, porque me divierto y  aparte porque me gusta el rugby.En un futuro me gustaría ganar la Urba con Pucara.

Em chart

Here are my points of view about the presentations.

Presentación Físico Química

Tuvimos que buscar datos sobre un material que la profesora nos decía,en mi caso Aluminio,y luego hacer una presentación con esos datos:

Modelos Atomicos

En la clase de Fisico Quimica tuvimos que hacer una línea del tiempo con la aplicación line.do , sobre todos los modelos atomicos.

For My Grandmothers Knitting

We had to create a presentation of a poem that we read called "For My Grandmothers Knitting".I made it with Francisco Tarantino.

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Short story

In the class of L/L Writing we have to write a short story that had to finished with "that was the last time I saw him/her"

                                                    The Party
911?!... -shouted Mike ,"There was a murder in my house!".
That same night , Mike was in the police station saying what happened, What he saw and if he could  describe the murder.
-"Please Mike , tell me the truth, What did you see this morning when you arrived home?".- Asked the detective .-"Okay , this is a long story :
Yesterday I was going to go to a party with my friend Josh.One minute before the party, Josh told me that he was not going to the party because he had problems with some bad people .He also asked me if he could sleep in my house only for one night because those peolpe who are looking for him knew his adress, and I let him stay.
Whatever , I went alone to the party and I had a good time meeting new people .But...there were some guys who knew that I was going to go to the party with Josh.I called him to tell him that some guys were looking for him, Josh told me that he don't know them and please if I could not give the address where he was , but it was too late.
The party finished and I returned home in the morning and when I arrived , I could see a big graffity of blood saying "He paid the consequences", when I entered home Ibsaw two teenagers finishing painting other graffities on the wall .I shouted at them and I could see the face of one of them , It was a 18 years old boy with a hat.That was the last time I saw him.